Independent
Projects
Outlines are due
by 8 Feb 07. This is what I expect from your outline:
1) Headings: Introduction, Methods, Results, Discussion, Literature
Cited, Tables and Figures.
2) Bulleted paragraph topics for at least intro and methods, plus any
other sections you have material to add at this stage.
3) Literature you have found so far that you will refer to in the text
under Literature Cited. The majority of the literature you consult
should be from the PRIMARY literature (i.e., articles in scientific
journals, NOT textbooks, websites, popular articles).
4) The introduction should start with the broad and progressively
narrow to your specific question. It should clearly articulate why the
topic is of interest to a broad ornithological community, and what
major question your specific question sheds light on. By the end of the
introduction, the reader should clearly understand the question you are
tackling and have an idea of the way you are going to tackle it.
5) Be sure to indicate to me somewhere any problems you have
encountered and uncertainties about how to proceed.
6) Read some papers! Pay attention to the structure of a well-written
introduction. Pay attention to what kind of material is appropriate for
each of the different section.
Here is a very
useful primer on writing
a scientific paper. Even if you have written many term papers
before, I recommend reading this series of webpages carefully.
A few words about
style:
1) Use active voice (e.g., "I compared males and females..." instead of
"Males and females were compared...")
2) Write in the first person.
3) Be concise. Use words sparingly. Avoid long sentences.
4) Format your papers according to the guidelines provided by the Auk.
Here is the
handout (8 March)
with detailed guidelines of what I expect in your
drafts.
Four minutes is a very short time and I will
be strict in cutting people off in consideration to other students.
Therefore, you must make VERY GOOD use of your time. Practising your
talk is critical to making the most of
your 4 minutes. Allocate no more than 1 slide to methods! They are
really the least interesting part of a project even though they take up
so much of your time. Your talk should mirror your paper. Try 2 slides
for an
intro, 1 methods slide, 1-2 results slides and 1 discussion slide. Use
a high-contrast color scheme and avoid red font on a blue background.
We will evaluate
your talks by asking ourselve the following questions:
a) Is it concise, well organized, and follow a logical structure?
b) Is it well-delivered (practised), on time, and information-rich?
c) Is it visually appealing with pictures & graphics that enhance
understanding?
d) Is the science well thought out? well conducted? well communicated?
e) Is there appropriate attention to the big-picture questions and
relevance of the study?
In addition to our evaluations, each student will provide brief
feedback on each and every other student. Giving supportive criticism is an
important skill for all scientists to devlop. You will be asked to
state 1 thing you thought was done particularly well in each talk, and
1 thing you thought could use improvement in the future. Your feedback
will be anonymous, but that doesn't mean you should be cruel. There are
always supportive ways of suggesting ways to improve and you should
work on finding those supportive ways. Likewise, just saying
"it was GREAT!" helps no one. There are ALWAYS ways to make a talk more
effective.
Please peruse
(and obey!) these "10 commandments" of scientific talks:
1) Face the
audience, not the screen.
2) Stand near the screen, not 20 meters away, and interact with your
slides.
3) Thou shalt not put too much text on one slide. (And thou shalt
not use less than 20-pt font.)
4) Prepare large graphics, using figures rather than tables whenever
possible. Never show huge tables of numbers.
5) Keep the pointer steady, resting it on the area you want to point
out. Thou shalt not wave the pointer wildly about in circles.
6) Never pass things to your audience during your talk. (Avoid
show-and-tell: they will only focus on the "show" part.)
7) Be sure to explain the broad biological context in the introduction
before jumping into specifics.
8) Give an "hourglass" talk: go from cosmic to general to specific to
general to cosmic.
9) Finish on time. This will require that you practice out loud several
times and time yourself.
10) Thou shalt never read your talk. It should sound like a
spontaneous explanation of your work. This will also come with
advance practice.